17 April 2011

Samples and words for Writing

[Samples]

IELTS Sample Letters of Band 7
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IELTS Essay Samples of Band 7
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Recently, ...
Some people let their voice out to ... .
On the other hand, others claim that ...
Although both sides have their own reasons, I personally agree that...

First and foremost, ...
This is largely because ...
The recent research by the ABC has indicated that more than 70% of the animals are ...
In this respect, ...

Second but not least, ...
It is well known that ...
The rational behind this is that ... / This is mainly attributed to the fact that ...
For example,
Consequently, ...
Likewise, ...


To sum up, ...
Therefore, I strongly urge people to ...
In conclusion, ...


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Cohesive phrases include wordings like…

It is clear that…
Because of this, …
To illustrate this, …
As this shows, …
As can clearly be seen from this example, …
After analyzing both points of view, …
Thus, the idea that…
Without a doubt, this causes…
To provide a summary, …
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Nowadays, ...
Primarily, ...
Moreover, ...

... , while ...
However, ...
Conversely, ...
Of course, ...
According to ...
Not only ... , but also ...
such as ... / ranging from A to B / including A and B
used to ...
If
the more ... , the better ...
physically, psychologically, financially
It is common knowledge that ...
I definitely believe ...



Composition for an argument essay

Including a thesis (in the case of an argument essay),
at least 2 supporting ideas,
real-life examples,
proper discussion of those examples as well as
some kind of summary and finally a reasoned conclusion.

To break it down, an argument essay is most likely going to contain 15 sentences partitioned into 4 paragraphs and follow a pattern something like this:



Introduction paragraph
  • A background sentence giving some background information on the essay topic.
  • A more detailed sentence linking the background sentence to the thesis.
  • A thesis that presents your point of view on your given topic.
  • An outline sentence declaring the 2 points you are going to use to support your thesis.

Supporting paragraph 1
  • A topic sentence illustrating the first point you will be presenting to support your thesis (this point taken from your outline sentence).
  • A sentence showing a real-life example of this topic in action.
  • A discussion sentence that shows how your example links or proves your topic sentence.
  • A conclusion sentence that links this entire paragraph back to your thesis.

Supporting paragraph 2
  • A topic sentence illustrating the second point you will be presenting to support your thesis (this point taken from your outline sentence).
  • A sentence showing a real-life example of this topic in action.
  • A discussion sentence that shows how your example links or proves your topic sentence.
  • A conclusion sentence that links this entire paragraph back to your thesis.

Conclusion paragraph

  • A summary sentence that briefly states the 2 points you discussed in your supporting paragraphs.
  • A restatement of your thesis using different words.
  • A prediction or recommendation based on the topic you have been given.


16 April 2011

Writing Letters

* Marking for the IELTS General Training Task 1 Writing
  • Task Achievement
  • Coherence and Cohesion
  • Lexical Resource
  • Grammatical Range and Accuracy

1 Answering the question.

1) Write at least 150 words.
2) Fully do all the things that the question asks you. In this case it asks you to do 3 main things:
  • explain the situation
  • apologize for the inconvenience
  • say what you are going to do
3) Make your letter realistic so it would function in a real life situation.


2 The Opening Greeting of the Letter

A friendly letter will open with Dear followed by a name which should then be followed by a comma, eg:
Dear John,

A semi-formal letter will also open with Dear and then be followed by a name, (if you decide that in the situation you would know the name) or by Sir (if it's a man), Madam (if it's a woman) or Sir/Madam if you don't know, eg:
Dear Mr. Phillips,
Dear Mrs. Phillips,
Dear Sir,
Dear Madam,
Dear Sir/Madam,


3 The Opening Paragraph of the Letter

In a semi-formal letter, I feel it is important to state the reason for the letter straight away. You could use the following to help you:

I am writing to ask/ tell//inform you that...
I am writing to ask/inquire...
I am writing with regard to...
I am writing with reference to...
I am writing in connection with...
I am writing in response to...
In reply to your letter, I am writing to... (if the question indicates that you have had a letter)

If the letter is a less formal one to a friend then you should open the letter in a friendlier way. EG:

Dear John,
Hi there! It's been so long since I've heard from you. I hope you are doing well and I hope all your family are doing fine. I'm pretty good in spite of working hard. Anyway, the reason I'm writing is...



4 The Substance of the Letter

[Asking for Help]
  • I would like you to...
  • I would be grateful if you could...
  • I need to ask your advice about...
  • I'd like to ask for information about...
  • What I'm looking for is...

[Complaining]
  • I'm writing to express my dissatisfaction/annoyance/ about...
  • I'm writing to express my anger at...
  • I am not happy about...
  • ... is not what I expected/was expecting.
  • I want to know what you are going to do about this situation.

[Thanking]
  • I'm very grateful for...
  • I'd like to thank you very much for...
  • I very much appreciated...

[Apologizing]
  • I'm very sorry that/about...
  • Please forgive me for...
  • I'd like to apologize about...
  • Please accept my apologies

5 Ending your Letter


For a formal letter, you could use:

If you require any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me. Thanking you in advance for your help, I look forward to hearing from you soon.

For a more informal letter you could use:

If you need to know anything else, just get in touch with me as soon as you can. Thanks a lot for your help and I hope to hear from you soon.


Finally you'll need to sign off your letter. For a formal letter use:

Yours faithfully, OR
Yours sincerely,

For an informal letter, love is not always appropriate though English speakers use it a lot. Better would be to use:

Regards,
Yours,
Best wishes,



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